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Oh god. This topic comes around every 6 months or so. Others should feel free to help me out here, but basically…

A lot of fanfic sounds like the other fanfic and other stuff that the same communities consume. In a given era and sector of fandom, that leads to a samey style. It often has a lot of overlap with a specific sector and era of genre fiction with a heavy dose of watches-tv-does-not-read-books elements on top.

AO3 House Style is relatively similar to the height of LJ Western slash fandom. Other fanfic styles are often similar but start showing other influences the more distant you get.

There are some major strains, not always in the same works:

• Transparent genre fiction prose that doesn’t call too much attention to itself. It’s there to convey plot, not make you notice the language qua language. You’ll see something similar in, say, a Mercedes Lackey novel (along with the terrible editing and protagonist centered morality that are also common in fic, haha).
• YA boom era YA vibes.
• Kind of forced “snark” and samevoice from many characters in a way that tells you the author spent a little too much time watching Buffy.
• World building and complex thriller/mystery/etc. plots that actually work typically take a back seat to pining, angst with a happy ending, and other more ship-focused, character interaction-focused, and emotions-focused things. The general idea of a mystery, vampire AU, etc. is often present, but it’s more of a backdrop. (Depends on the part of fandom though!)
• Huge focus on the internal psychological and emotional state of characters.
• Lots of hurt/comfort, both physical and emotional.
• Lots of serialized work that shows the traces of being written that way (dangling plot threads, inflated word count, returning to similar plot points in a way that wouldn’t happen if the thing were completely written, revised, and then only posted serially).
• Certain cliched phrases like “He smelled of __ and __ and something uniquely him”, carding fingers through hair (thanks, commenters for researching this one a year or two ago and proving it’s way more common in fic!), “Oh. Oh.”, etc.
• If the fic is more self-consciously literary, it’s full of sentences that trail off to the point where you’re almost not sure what actually happened.
• Often lots of very short paragraphs and lots of scenes that are almost all dialogue
• Frequently third person limited present tense. Some third person limited past tense. Less of other stuff unless you’re looking at a fandom where canon is first person or you’re looking at readerfic (which is on AO3 but is not really “AO3 House Style”).

Honestly, some people would just say “sounds like fanfic”, but if you go read primarily on SpaceBattles or something, you’re going to find a lot of stories that don’t sound quite the same as your prototypical AO3 fic.