I think the only kind of criticism i do, and only sometimes is of typos that legit make the phrase confusing. I go “hey i assume you meant X in ‘y phrase’ right? Just to know i got what you meant” Once a person commented that my smut was wordy, and that was a criticism that confused me. Like, yes, the smut has words. It’s a little long. Are the words too hard, did i make too long paragraphs? The person didn’t even explain what was up lol
Some people favor smut that’s less like Anne Rice and more like Hemingway, I guess.
Now I’m trying to imagine what it would look like if Hemingway wrote for Omegaverse. 😂
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