Former whumpee– who thought they had run far enough, who thought they had become strong enough– getting that sudden, visceral, horrifying, crushing reminder that no one can escape their pain and fear forever.
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Whumpee using their whole bodily force, over and over again to try to break through an immovable barrier. Bashing themselves against it again, and again, wrecking themselves with every attempt. Screaming and panting and crying until they physically can’t stand[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Caretaker was missing, or captured, and the second that they’re back whumpee grabs them tight and starts to sob into their chest about how worried they were, but caretaker pets whumpee’s hair and assures them it’s alright.
Depressed and lonely whumper who has no one they can trust or talk to in their life. who ends up chatting away to, and even emotionally unloading their feelings on whumpee. Depressed and lonely whumper who slumps down to have[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Caretaker been lying to whumpee. They’d been lying to whumpee every step of the way. And the worst part was that upon finidng it out, whumpee realized they didn’t care. It didn’t matter to them if caretaker was actually whumper.[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Whumper holding whumpee in their arms and realizing with shock that whumpee is dying. Whumper realizing that this time they have gone too far, and now they have to fix this somehow, or they’re going to lose whumpee for good.[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Whumper smears whumpee’s blood over their skin with their fingers, and then licks the blood off of them. When whumpee expresses shock, disbelief, or disgust, whumper puts their fingers in whumpee’s mouth to give them a tastel.
When whumper digs their fingers deliberately into whumpee’s injury, and whumpee suddenly can’t stop themself from screaming.
Whumper grabs whumpee by the chin, their nails digging into the soft flesh around whumpee’s mouth and throat. Whumper draws them close– face to face– piercing gaze boring into whumpee’s eyes with an as yet unspoken threat or promise.
There was a certain level of pain that Karl Heisenberg was in every day of his life. It was his constant companion. As far as he knew, it was a simple fact of his being alive. It was a simple[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Whumpee’s wounds from where they were bound. First raw and wet and raised. Later rough, and dry and flaking. Angry, pink flesh puckering to interrupt unbroken skin.
“But sir, I’m fine. I swear I can work today!” “You are absolutely not fine, Mr. Justice. You’re running a fever.” Kristoph cupped Apollo’s overly warm face with his hand. “If you won’t take care of yourself, then the task[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Before I Sleep (580 words) by thesavagesabretooth Summary: After having his legs maimed by a monster Simon is about to freeze to death in the woods. Another monster, one who calls himself Bobby Fulbright, shows up to rescue him. Based[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Slumped in the corner with his hand on his chest Simon felt his heartbeat starting to slow. Fifteen minutes perhaps. That was what he had left, and then it would be all over. He had been a man with a[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Lost and Found (1138 words) by thesavagesabretooth summary: After being captured and savagely beaten, Zelgadis finds himself tended to by the most unexpected rescuer imaginable– Copy Rezo. – Zelgadis’ shoulders ached worse even than the rest of his body as[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Whumpee’s wrists and shoulders aching, bearing all of their weight while whumpee has been chained up and left hanging from the ceiling by their arms.
Whumpee waiting for help to come while they try not to bleed out. Whumpee holding tight to their bloody wound as best they can, taking deep, slow breaths. Whumpee feeling the hot, slick blood all over their fingers, and knowing[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Bound whumpee already on their knees, kicked down from behind and laying prostrate in chains in front of imperious, sneering whumper.
Something woke Apollo in the middle of the night. Half asleep, he saw his bed partner tossing and turning, mumbling under his breath, beautiful face contorted in a pained grimace as he clutched the sheets. Kristoph Gavin’s blond hair was[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Whumpee screaming their throat raw. Screaming until they’re hoarse. Until every attempt to use their voice hurts as bad as everything else. Screaming until the only thing that comes out of their mouth is choked croaking noise. Screaming, and screaming[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Whumpee’s burned, or bleeding back pressed against the cool kiss of a metal. Whumpee’s already broken skin dragged carelessly against warm, splintering wood. Whumpee’s bruised body, exhausted hitting the rough, wet cement floor. Whumpee’s wrists and ankles chafing on ropes[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
The seductive power of obedience. When whumper is trying to convince whumpee that pleasure and obedience are synonymous. When it’s obvious that obedience is the wrong choice, but it is tempting– oh is it tempting.
The precious last moment between lovers. The shaking fingers. The whispered promises of something after the end. The freeze frame on the final act of tenderness. Then cut to black.
Whumper who is physically larger than whumpee restraining whumpee with their body. Whumper pushing whumpee against the wall and pinning them there with whumper’s hand on their wrists. Whumper grabbing whumpee from behind and holding them tightly so whumpee can’t[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
When whumper drags whumpee’s face right in front of their own. By whumpee’s collar. By whumpee’s chin. By whumpee’s hair. By whumpee’s bonds. Whumpee can’t escape whumper’s eyes locking with theirs. Whumper’s breath on their face.
Whumpee is rescued from whumper by caretaker. Caretaker spirits whumpee away like a knight in shining armor, taking them to their home where whumpee can rest and recover in peace– in luxury perhaps. Caretaker is soft and gentle and tends[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Whumpee who falls in love with whumper. Whumpee who falls in love with whumper despite their best efforts to hate them. Whumpee who falls in love with whumper in those moments of tenderness between all the pain. Whumpee who falls[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Caretaker insisting on sleeping in recovering whumpee’s bed with them– despite whumpee’s protests– because whenever whumpee sleeps alone they have insomnia or nightmares.
Whumper holds whumpee’s half limp body up with both hands tight on their collar. By now, whumpee can barely struggle, and only looks up at whumper with wide eyes and an open mouth. “Listen, whumpee, this is is the moment[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
consider, clone whump. Where either the whumper, or the whumpee is a clone, or they both are, or they’re not sure which is the clone, and which isn’t. I’m just kind of imagining the implications of being beaten and tortured[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Blue blood trickled from Zelgadis’ lips as he coughed, and he felt more of it oozing around the rocky scales in his arcane flesh. Dizzy, he tried to stand, and he faltered. A pair of gloved hands steadied him. “Xelloss?”[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Whumper cups whumpee’s chin in their hand and they pull whumpee’s gaze up to face them. With a smile on their face, they look whumpee dead in the eye. “No one’s coming for you, precious.”
Recovering whumpee with all the breath suddenly knocked out of them as something innocent and seemingly unrelated reminds them of their experience with whumper. Sometimes it really is like falling straight into the abyss, forever.
Caretaker finds recovering whumpee curled up in a tight little ball on the bed, hugging their pillow. Caretaker asks what’s wrong, and what’s on their mind, but whumpee just shakes their head and won’t or can’t speak about it or[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Whumpee’s thought, as they finally bowed their head and knelt before whumper: There was something more than relief. Comfort. There was something almost romantic about giving in.
Whumper rolled the half-smoked cigarette between their fingers thoughtfully as they looked over whumpee once more. Whumpee was bound tightly with their arms above their head– stripped naked, sweating, and bleeding in places already from whumper’s tender ministrations. Whumper watched[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
minor whump prompts: Whumper taking away whumpee’s comfort items like plushies, or blankets. Whumpee being told about, or shown evidence of, harm happening to their parents or siblings. Whumpee being drugged or poisoned with candy or treats. Whumper using threats[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Whumpee– concentrating, dissociating, trying to bear the pain– biting their lip so hard that they draw blood. Tasting copper in their mouth of their own making. Realizing what they’ve done too late.
When caretaker comes in, they find whumpee curled up asleep on the couch with their knees drawn up and their arms around a pillow. The flicker of the television paints the dim room in soft colored light, shimmering on whumpee’s[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Whumper cutting into whumpee. Watching the flesh part under the tip of their blade like cloth coming undone. The red beads of blood emerging from the wound and spilling forth over skin. The panting breath and agonized sounds of whumpee’s[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Whumpee on their knees. Whumper pushing whumpee down by their shoulders to their knees. Whumper kicking whumpee’s legs out from under them to get them to their knees. Whumper pulling whumpee up from their belly to their knees. Whumper grabbing[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
First whumper uses physical violence to train whumpee. Pain is the great teacher. When whumpee has been trained to respond to pain, then the actual violence isn’t needed. Then all whumper needs is the threat of violence, and whumpee responds.[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Robot whumpee laying on the engineering table in pieces, half aware in low power mode as caretaker gently looks them over and inspects them to find out how serious the damage is. Caretaker’s hands deep inside the delicate, complicated inner[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Whumper menacing whumpee, as whumpee cowers in front of them, trying to stand defiant. Whumper takes a step forward, whumpee takes a step back. Again. And again. Until finally, whumpee finds themselves with a wall behind their back, and nowhere[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
“You don’t understand!” Whumper grabs whumpee by the collar with both hands and forces their back against the wall, pinning them there under whumper’s body. Whumpee cringes as whumper snarls in their face. “You don’t understand and so help me[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Whump scenarios for a coffee shop AU:inspired by this post Tyrannical whumper boss who forces rookie whumpee barista into more and more illegal and abusive situations (your favorite flavor). Rich business whumper takes a ‘liking’ to whumpee and hires them[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Recovering whumpee keeps having dreams about whumper. When caretaker asks, whumpee calls them nightmares. But is it true? Does it count as a nightmare when all they’re doing is talking? It makes whumpee wonder– what kind of broken person would[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I love the sick and delicious ironic contrast of whumper also being the one taking care of whumpee. Whumper brushing out the knots and mats in whumpee’s hair and stroking their fingers through it. Whumper treating and stroking and kissing[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
“Is this about sex?” “Everything is about sex, whumpee. Except sex. Sex is about control.”
Whumper– wild-eyed and half deranged with a murderous look on their face– grabs whumpee by the throat, their fingernails digging into the soft flesh there as they force whumpee against the wall beneath them. Whumper leans in against them, breath[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
the-bar-sinister: Whumper slamming whumpee’s face down hard on a table, or on the floor itself, and holding them down tight against it. Whumpee can see and feel the blood dripping from their mouth or nose pooling on the surface, sticky[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Whumper slamming whumpee’s face down hard on a table, or on the floor itself, and holding them down tight against it. Whumpee can see and feel the blood dripping from their mouth or nose pooling on the surface, sticky and[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Whumper grabbing whumpee by the hair and jerking them around by it. The tight, stinging pain of the scalp when they resist. The danger of ripping out strands of hair. Whumpee forced to look wherever whumper directs them.
Recovering whumpee who refuses to make themselves comfortable, treat their wounds, or take pain medications because for whatever reason they don’t feel like the deserve to heal.
Whumpee has finally escaped. They’ve finally gotten their revenge. They visited all the horrors on whumper that whumper visited on them. Every dream of revenge that sustained them has been fulfilled. They are free. They are safe. And when they’re[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Whumper who grabs their whumpee by the hair, and drags their gaze around by it. Who turns their whumpee’s head this way and that by force, just to look at them from whatever angle they choose. Whumpee who flinches instinctively[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Whumpee seems to be watching their own body in a distant haze as the claws dig into their belly and rip the flesh of it open. There is pain– oh god there is pain, whumpee watches their own body shudder[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Whumpers who are former whumpees. Whumpers who were taught the ways and effectiveness of pain and violence by direct experience. Whumpers who learned the art of torture from all the things that worked on them. Whumpers who are perpetuating a[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Chemical whump… Whumpee struggling to put on their gas mask as chemical warfare agents burn their lungs. Whumpee who can smell the stinging scent of the acid that’s burning through the soles of their shoes and is about to reach[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
In Justice We Trust (22279 words) by thesavagesabretooth With Simon Blackquill and Athena Cykes assigned as their psychologists, the Phantom and Fulbright must grapple with their identity, their deeds, their future, and their love for the twisted samurai whom they[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
In Justice We Trust (18474 words) by thesavagesabretooth read chapter 5 here With Simon Blackquill and Athena Cykes assigned as their psychologists, the Phantom and Fulbright must grapple with their identity, their deeds, their future, and their love for the[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
In Justice We Trust (15833 words) by thesavagesabretooth read chapter 4 With Simon Blackquill and Athena Cykes assigned as their psychologists, the Phantom and Fulbright must grapple with their identity, their deeds, their future, and their love for the twisted[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
In Justice We Trust (12326 words) by thesavagesabretooth read part 3 here December 21, 2:00 pm Simon arrived precisely on time for his meeting with the Chief Prosecutor and slid his way into the room with the approval of his[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
In Justice We Trust (8532 words) by thesavagesabretooth read previous chapter here summary: With Simon Blackquill and Athena Cykes assigned as their psychologists, the Phantom and Fulbright must grapple with their identity, their deeds, their future, and their love for[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
In Justice We Trust (6009 words) by thesavagesabretooth read part 2 here summary: With Simon Blackquill and Athena Cykes assigned as their psychologists, the Phantom and Fulbright must grapple with their identity, their deeds, their future, and their love for[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
In Justice We Trust (1177 words) by thesavagesabretoothRelationships: The Phantom/Simon Blackquill, Bobby Fulbright/Simon BlackquillAdditional Tags: Pining, the very beginning of a redemption arc, Sharing a Body, Implied/Referenced Child Abuse Not enough Ace Attorney fics take advantage of the fact that[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Last Dance in Pallet Town – Pokemon Mafia AU / crime noir thriller pt 1–series content: extreme violence, foul language, sexual content, smoking, alcohol, adult situations, criminal behavior Pallet Town, 1922 By the time Ash Ketchum was 18 years old[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
For Chris Redfield? 😎 Very well. 1. How do you kidnap/capture your OC? The most effective method would be locate where he’s living, and drug him in the night while he’s already asleep. 3. What kind of torture methods would[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
An Alphabet of Whump A is for Acid that’s dribbled on flesh,B is for Bruises, fading or fresh. C is for Captive who cannot escape,D is for dubcon, which isn’t quite rape. E is exsanguinate– blood draining out,F is for[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
September, 5 When Mia opens the door to the office there’s a brown haired woman with a gun waiting inside. She’s wearing a pink business suit, the blouse mostly open, with a familiar shaped pendant nestled between her breasts. More[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
working on a longer version of that Phoenix serial killer AU. It’s slow going but… — Miles had been sleeping fitfully. He always did on the night of an investigation– the night before a trial– but it was worse than[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Vriska had always known how she would die. Not the specifics of course she couldn’t see the future. But every troll died the same way. By violence. Every troll, in their own way, died alone. She’d already died alone once,[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Biohazards’ Febuwhump roundup All of our entries for this year’s febuwhump. We were hoping to complete the whole month, but sadly our arm had other plans. – A Dish Served Hot (100 words) by thesavagesabretoothFandom: Metal GearCharacters: Otacon (Metal Gear),[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
The pain of the mortal blow faded quickly– distant– far away, and unimportant. Mia tried to hold onto it as it faded, but it was no use. And soon the desire to hold on faded too. What she held onto[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Miles tried his best, but there was really no avoiding elevators all the time. They were simply a fact of life, and one he did his best to deal with. He had a routine, when he rode the elevator. After[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
It took until halfway across the wires over the ravine for the sound of groaning and creaking from the base of the elevator to go from uncomfortable to legitimately concerning. Snake grimaced, hurrying as best he could hand over hand[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Hazel hurled herself bodily at the woman in an attempt to tackle her to the ground without warning. Her body collided with the woman’s, the handle of the gun jutting sharply into her stomach as she tackled her forward and[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I love this question. Thank you so much <3 My favorite thing about writing whump– favorite whump scenario in general– is the exploration of violence as an inherently corrupting force. The concept that violence will always make a person worse,[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Cut Down Written for @febuwhump day 26 prompt: “help them”. AO3 link — Peter Pan was a ruthless killer, but he was not an efficient one. ‘Thank god,’ Wendy thought to herself as she parted the little knot of boys[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
We have started work in earnest on what will (finally) be a readable version of our giant Metal Gear Solid time travel/time loop fic (with extra spicy whump elements)
Sabretooth had been mute, and slow, and easily frightened when Tabby first met him. He wore the trauma of what had befallen in every expression, and every movement, more abused animal than a man. Tabby had taken him in like[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
The tape snaps on with the grainy buzz of video. The color on the tape is over-saturated, with high contrast, and buzzes of video static obscure bits of it now and again. All the angles are high and wide– flipping[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
If I were to create a setting just for whump, I think it would be a gangsters/mafia setting in the 1970s, bouncing around between California, NY and Miami. Brutal violence set against a backdrop of oozing, smoggy sunsets, drug rings,[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Phoenix groaned, slumped limply across the couch, with his feet over one arm rest and one of his arms flopped over the side. There was a scattering of bottles strewn across the coffee table that he couldn’t count. Every time[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
post on my dashboard reminded me nostalgically of my pokemon whump era when I was a teenager. It was this incredibly angsty and brutal story idea of course based on SYLPHCO and pokemon experiments… Maybe some day I should bring[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
5. What character or characters are your favorite to do whumpy things to in your writing? lately at least the answers are Chris Redfield (RE) and Otacon (MGS)! >: D 11. Share one of your favorite whumpy scenes that you[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Flayn had been held in that dark basement for days, but this was the first time her kidnapper had threatened her. The immense armored figure of the death knight loomed over her from behind, the blade of his sword under[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Phoenix jerked Miles’ head back by his hair– fingers wound painfully tight in the silvery locks. He held the sharp edge of the cold knife to the other man’s trembling throat. “Phoenix, what– what are you?” Miles’ skin prickled as[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Chris knew that there was something wrong. He knew that he was different, after Wesker–his master– had killed him and brought him back to life. The real horror was that he couldn’t bring himself to care. There was no fear[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
The last person Otto had expected to see sprawled on the medical cot of his laboratory when he returned after his outing was Peter. His mask was off, and Otto could see the bruises and gashes across his soft, calf-eyed[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Prurient Interest – thesavagesabretooth – Metal Gear (Video Games) [Archive of Our Own] Prurient Interest (100 words) by thesavagesabretoothChapters: 1/1Fandom: Metal Gear (Video Games)Rating: MatureWarnings: Graphic Depictions Of ViolenceRelationships: Ocelot/Otacon (Metal Gear)Characters: Otacon (Metal Gear), Ocelot (Metal Gear)Additional Tags: Drabble,[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Jack hadn’t thought about how much blood there would be. He watched as it poured down from the deep gashes, over his victims body and down the wall, pooling over the white floor, channeled in between the grooves between the[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
The pain was far away now, and unimportant. What was important was the touch of his sister’s hands on him, and the sweet sound of her voice as she held him in her lap, singing gently. This was all Alfred[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Hal was aware that he was still alive, but that was close to all he was aware of. There was pain, somewhere. In his body, probably, he was pretty sure. But it felt distant, and unimportant. He tried to assess[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
written for @febuwhump day 11 prompt: time loop Have some OC whump this time. — The weight of her gun in hand was a small comfort as she crawled her way into the dirty corner of the end of the[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
The guard grabbed at the collar of Hal’s labcoat, but Hal grabbed the gun that was hidden under it. He didn’t think. He didn’t have time to think. The man would have crushed his windpipe, or broken his skull to[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Bees, my god. – thesavagesabretooth – Homestuck [Archive of Our Own] Bees, my god. (100 words) by thesavagesabretoothChapters: 1/1Fandom: HomestuckRating: MatureWarnings: No Archive Warnings ApplyCharacters: Sollux CaptorAdditional Tags: Whump, Pain, Injury, Bees, bee stings, During Canon, Drabble Summary: Sollux wakes[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
How It Lingers – thesavagesabretooth – Persona 5 [Archive of Our Own] How It Lingers (100 words) by thesavagesabretoothChapters: 1/1Fandom: Persona 5Rating: MatureWarnings: Graphic Depictions Of ViolenceCharacters: Persona 5 Protagonist, Kurusu AkiraAdditional Tags: Whump, Hurt No Comfort, During Canon, Drabble,[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Screw You – thesavagesabretooth – Biohazard | Resident Evil (Gameverse) [Archive of Our Own] Screw You (100 words) by thesavagesabretoothChapters: 1/1Fandom: Biohazard | Resident Evil (Gameverse)Rating: MatureWarnings: Graphic Depictions Of ViolenceRelationships: Karl Heisenberg/Chris RedfieldCharacters: Karl Heisenberg, Chris Redfield (Resident Evil)Additional[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
The worst kind of deal you can make is a bad one. The worst kind of move you can play is the only one on the board. The worst part is knowing how fucked you are and doing it anyway.[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…